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birth of a sun by sewer-pancake birth of a sun by sewer-pancake
just another p.o.s. :shrug:
my planet lighting is off, and im not sure about my texture choices ( from nasa, btw ;) ).
the neb is an old one i painted mixed with a cloud stock from here [link] .


edit- changed rings.

edit #2- tried to add depth to the neb, so i busted out me intuos 4 (hubby got me for christmas), and got a little smudge happy. :P
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Brukhar Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010
ok first this is NOT a pos. it's a bit oversharpened, but the colors are really nice and the composition is getting better. the main problem is the planetary rings, the POV is messed up...it looks like you're looking up at them, but they get bigger near the side and it looks weird.

keep practicing, i really like this new nebula style :)
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sewer-pancake Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
is that any better? the sharpness was my doing (to the jpeg), not the psd file. as for the rings, it is a problem area of mine, cuz i cant do perspective, i guess. and thanks. :)
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Brukhar Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010
yeah, definitely better now :) still could use a little depth work on the nebula but you're really improving :)
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sewer-pancake Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i tried to add some depth to the neb, is it any better now?
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Brukhar Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010
a bit over smudged, but you're heading in the right direction
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sewer-pancake Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i did get smudge happy, but this is actually the oversmudged one, mixed with the old one to un-smudge it a tad. :D it was way worse when it was by itself.
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